Вопросы оформления сценария. Часть 5

[сэр Сергей]

Не совсем то, правда... Отыскал сценарий "Аватара" на английском... Там, ведь, тоже ГГ перемещается в тело аватара....


Там все дается через Описание действия



Вот сцена первой тренировки Джека в теле аватара




EXT.AVATARCOMPOUND-DAY1919
Jakeemerges,blinkinginthemorningsun.Hefindshimself
intheAVATARCOMPOUND--alivingandtrainingarea.
Nearby,acoupleofAVATARSareplayingone-on-oneinfront
ofa(non-regulationheight)basketballnet.Othersgoabout
theirdailyactivitiesaroundthecompound.
Jakeflexeshislegs--JUMPS--andlandsalittle
unsteadily,buthisexpressionisjoyful.
HetakesafewstepsandbreaksintoaRUN.Peopleare
callingtohim,somehwere,buthedoesn’thearthem--he’s21.
running.RUNNING!
HefindshimselfintheCOMPOUNDGARDEN,andstopsamid
neatlytendedrowsofALIENPLANTS.Helooksdown,wiggling
histoesinthewarmsoil.Theninhalesdeeply--revelling
inthealiensmells--earth,plants,thenearbyforest.He
looksathisbarefootprintinthesoilofanalienworld.
GRACE(O.S.)
HeyMarine!
Jaketurnsatthefamiliarvoicetosee--
AstatuesqueFEMALEAVATARwalkingtowardhim.AVATARGRACE
ismagnificent,withpantherthighs,flatmuscularstomach
andfirmathlete’sbreasts.ShewearsshortsandaT-shirt.
Inhumanyearsshewouldbeabout35.
JAKE
Grace?
GRACE
Wellwho’dyouexpect,numbnuts?
Thinkfast!
ShethrowshimapieceofPandoranfruit,whichhecatches.
GRACE
Mo***controlislookinggood.
Jakebitesintothefruit,thejuicerunningdownhischin.
NORM(O.S.)
Hey,checkitout.
JaketurnstoseeNORM’SAVATARposinglikeabodybuilder--
chestshot,backshot,bi’s.
NORM
Iamalivinggod.


Ссылка на сценарий

https://snegiri-studio.ru/pl/fileser...d57763e169.pdf